Just Plain Crude

Filth, foul, greedy, crude
   Soiled beauty and freedom-
      Will this disgrace end?

A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 12:12 PM
It's really a tragedy, what's been happening, the question is posed sure needs to be addressed by those responsible...also thank you for my HM in your past contest :) glad to be in your list :)
Burton Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Enjoyed this poetry, love the questions. Have a great day as well.:)
Chamma Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:23 AM
A beautiful piece. To the point and very potent. Hope everything's fine where you are. It's been a while. ALways, Farah
Esquire Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 10:33 PM
Dear Amy, Great Write Good Luck SUPERB YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- My POEM "OUR Glass, HOUR Glass is not in YOUR contest and I would Like YOUR Critque on it I just recently got out of Hospital and have restricted use of my hands Please donot think I'm shunning YOU it takes me over an hour to write a small Comment like this ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
Hill Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 5:11 AM
well done...TAH
Orozco Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 8:04 PM
beautiful and good luck!
Richards Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Good luck with this one! You have said it well.....will this disgrace ever end? ~ This will do well in the contest, I'm sure! ~ Carrie
A   Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 5:43 PM
well done on the Haiku, Amy, enjoyed,..p..d
Green Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 4:34 PM
I can't post a blog- all the words I want to say are 4 letters and it's not exactly appropriate here at the soup... perhaps later after I have settled down some.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Agreed.. why not post a blog and say as much as u need Amy .. I am so upset by this senseless waste of animal life ... its so sad and tragic they we invade their space.. hope u decide to post the blog and if u have a special poem for it...go for it girl.. behind u 100% ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Perfect words for the photo in Raul's contest and good luck Amy... a tragic event and one so horrific to the environment and wild and sea life ... so sad.. a great write ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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