Just Out of Sight

I feel you there beyond the veil
a tenderness never before known

soft moving as a warm spring breeze
your touch I feel so brief

I love you words never needed
your sorrows are mine 

even though I can not see 
not one tear shed on your cheek

your whispers of warmth flow by
drawing hearts in the sky

an inter love shines bright
my trust in you unfading

no matter where you go 
that love never dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/20/2009 11:45:00 AM
Yes, true love is everlasting. Interesting slant on the topic. The title works well with the poem. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Have a wonderful day. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:38:00 PM
i have to admit i'm a romantic at heart and you defintely reeled me in with this one. well done
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Date: 4/16/2009 10:00:00 AM
What a tender composition of love and devotion ... it draws me in so much that I am almost a part of it ... forgive my intrusion into the privacy of such an awesome feeling ... this is poetry! Excellent talent.
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Date: 4/15/2009 4:13:00 PM
A gentle beauty of expression. Whether this is for someone real, or an intuitive feeling of love to be, it is most breathtaking. My favorite is the fifth verse. So very beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:24:00 PM
What a sad beautiful write,.....Aleera
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