JUST ONE MORE REVELATION

JUST ONE MORE REVELATION

Lines that radiate out from a centre
Like spokes of an umbrella or wheel
As new thoughts and ideas are born
Yet some memories can still intrude
Reminiscent of the things I’ve seen 
And all that I could have ever been
Or even by mistake, have construed
As if a baby from the womb is torn
And making me both think and feel
That this universe is like a placenta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 8:35 PM
different take sure, nice write dear poet. Congratulations on your win dear poet.Cheers!!!
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 9:36 AM
- Thoughtful poem, Howard - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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