Just One More Day

Inspired By The Contest
but Not Applicable 

If I had just one more day with you
These would be my wishes
I would come up from behind you
when you started doing dishes
My arms would then caress you
as I held you from behind
and kissed each ear so softy
then whisper you are mine
I would spin you like a top
till your eyes and mine both met
then I'd take you in my arms 
and carry you to bed
The rest I'll tell you later
For it's not prudent here to say
When God gives me the privilege
To be with you just one more day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 7:16 PM
So well crafted with splendid cadence and rhyming. Extremely entertaining my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Well done Jerry, and I liked the way you kept your poem clean so we can use our own imagination. I reckon you both fell asleep - Lindsay
Curtis Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 5:59 AM
How'd you know, thank for stopping by mate
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