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Just one more beer


Time passes slowly when the mind is clear 
But when the mind gets muddled, like mint in a jar, 
There never seems enough liquor by far 
And you tell yourself just one more beer 
To fill an lonely Saturday night 
For try as One might  
The thoughts and trauma nightmares 
Come creeping with regret 
Bringing you down a hole you wanted to forget 
To the darkest days or false glimmers  of hope 
That you've healed inside and are able to cope 
With life's ups and downs as the years float by   
When your throat is so sore and your eyes want to cry but are barren and dry 
Because you're twisted with anxiety 
And hate to be a liar 
Why can't you just be normal 
Is it genes or inner turmoil 
That wants to fill this never-ending glass 
To drink away the past 
So you empty your bottle into the drain 
And decide again to work through the pain 
Instead of drinking it away for another day
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Ashley Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 5:53 PM
Dear Ashley, you paint a powerful portrait of someone weighed down with burdens of past regrets, false hopes, disappointments and pain who, despite these feelings, finds the strength to face the present moment, one moment at a time, instead of giving in to the urge to "drink away the past". "So you empty your bottle into the drain/And decide again to work through the pain/Instead of drinking it away for another day" - a potent finale! Beautiful in expressing angst, sadness and victory. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gleason Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:11 PM
Thank you Susan- learning to cope in healthy ways can be challenging but it's worth the work
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