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Just One Kiss

Agonizing anticipation Just waiting and longing Tantalizing and mesmerizing Why must you keep me waiting Teasing and empty promises of pleasing I'm dying! Yes, I'm dying of thirst Quench me! I'm impatiently waiting for that sweet taste of nectar Soft, wet and oh so delicious No, no, not this time Yes! The time is now, the place is here Miss Reality has shown her sun lit face An encounter then embrace of the chilvarous kind Delectable and gratifying Give me more! Give me more! Don't stop! Please! Just don't stop!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2018 5:59:00 PM

I can taste the hunger in this one. Well expressed! Sorry about commenting below, for some reason it just put me off.

James Horn

Date: 12/28/2017 4:10:00 PM

My Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2018 5:57:00 PM

when you are on someone else's page the comments should be about their work not yours. If you are not interested in other people how do you expect them to be interested in what you have to say???

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/20/2017 7:38:00 AM

Hello Stewart,welcome to Poetry Soup. Your poem is romantic. Beautifully done. have a nice day my friend.

Jean Murray

Date: 11/20/2017 5:33:00 AM

Wow is right! Please let me add my welcome Stewart. Poems as passionate as this are truly pleasing.

Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/24/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thank you, Jean.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/3/2017 10:20:00 AM

A very good poem, Stewart. Romantically robust w/loads of passion. Excellent poem. May love light your path always.

Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/3/2017 12:30:00 PM

Thanks, Freddie!

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 11/2/2017 3:04:00 PM

Nice poem here Stewart! Very powerful!

Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/3/2017 12:31:00 PM

Thanks, Kudzai!

Skat A

Date: 9/15/2016 11:24:00 PM

Stewart, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Stewart Watkins
Date: 11/5/2017 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Skat A

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2016 10:49:00 PM

WOW! Stewart,,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Stewart Watkins
Date: 9/14/2016 12:37:00 AM

Thank you. I just signed on today. I like what I see so far. :-)