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Just One

have you ever tried to be something you're not ever want something so badly it could not be forgot ever believe so hard that a wish could come true and most unusually come true for you have you ever believed that you could reach for that star just above your head not very far and told yourself time and time again this time I'll win this time I'll win that was the way I felt about you it really seemed like my dream had come true i tried to be loved by feelings from you and what would never be true i wished so hard for you i believed in something and you were that star forever inside my head but never in your heart and i tell myself time and time again that hope leads to failure and to love is to sin have i not an immortal beloved that belongs to my soul must i search forever while my body grows old am i cursed forever to believe that she must be out there somewhere amongst all the stars my heaven knows not where could it be because of God that she has not been chosen and the family line till end of time forever to be frozen but i must admit i would be quite content with just someone in my arms to have and to hold and maybe grow old the two and not just one

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Date: 9/7/2010 10:13:00 AM
Wishing never hurt anyone so keep on wishing. You never know what is around the next corner. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John iii. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:51:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem this week! well written!
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations John on your great poem being featured. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:31:00 PM
Congrats John on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all.. and thankxxx for your many sweet comments on my wedding .. with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:45:00 PM
hmmm, now I see why you commented the way you did to my vow senryu. john, you just met someone my opposite. I am a very loyal person, you needed to meet that kind. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/19/2010 11:17:00 AM
very romantic...
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:23:00 AM
John, I hope it is not you who is suffering in this piece. You deserve to have love in your life my friend. An outstanding heartfelt write. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 9:59:00 AM
This is such a beautiful write, a little sad but hopeful. You made me laugh with your comment on my piece John, thanks for the smiles :) Ps: I can relate to this piece as well
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:08:00 AM
good write John...JB
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Date: 8/18/2010 5:32:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:12:00 PM
its a phenomenon how dreams can come true if you think about it as if you already have it in your life. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/18/2010 3:54:00 PM
This is so beautifully written and also heartbreaking, John. I hope this is not a reflection of problems you are encountering in your new relationship. You do deserve to be happy. Sometimes we just have to keep trying and trying. Believe me, my friend, I can relate to your words. I just want to see you happy. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2010 2:30:00 PM
Good luck in searching for the perfect mate..Have a way with words in putting down your feelings about this..Sara
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