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Quiet Closed out Can't get in Silence Not in mind Left behind Standing alone Time slowly passing Shrouded, still Unknown Passed by Happy around Longing, waiting Left in the dark Seeking something Everything parts Nothing is real Its all a big fake Lies in secret Never called out Hushing, darkening No one remains Cold cold places Forgotten again Every time Tender, hurting Pain unseen Take it away Please notice me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/24/2009 9:43:00 AM
Different write. Sara
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Date: 12/24/2009 9:37:00 AM
Dark but unfortunately so many suffer... Very nice write and very visual...God Bless Taz
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