Just Notice

Quiet
Closed out
Can't get in
Silence
Not in mind
Left behind 
Standing alone
Time slowly passing
Shrouded, still
Unknown
Passed by
Happy around
Longing, waiting
Left in the dark
Seeking something
Everything parts
Nothing is real
Its all a big fake
Lies in secret
Never called out
Hushing, darkening
No one remains
Cold cold places
Forgotten again
Every time
Tender, hurting
Pain unseen
Take it away
Please notice me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 9:43 AM
Different write. Sara
Pickett Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Dark but unfortunately so many suffer... Very nice write and very visual...God Bless Taz
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