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Just My Song

I'm running across a tightrope of strings... Making music with steps to the words I sing... Each footprint a different sound, some happy some sad... But together they play a song to all the things I've held and had... It's a musical composition that doesn't miss a note... A diary of me in song that resonates of love and hope...

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/27/2011 7:19:00 AM

This is awesome.. I love this, this made me dance through the end :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2011 4:22:00 PM

Very expressive and emotive work..So optimistic..Enjoyed reading work this eve..Thanks so much for the visit to my blog..Sara

John Aaron Green

Date: 12/26/2011 4:09:00 PM

enjoyable and impressive,,,nice read,,thanks,,for stopping by and reading my poetry..............

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/26/2011 1:07:00 PM

Very nice write Michael! I enjoyed this immensely! My life would have many musical notes...and some would be out of tune! Wonderful poem, awesome work!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/26/2011 10:10:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem, Michael. Love the imagery. Kim

Tracy Edwards

Date: 12/26/2011 6:27:00 AM

So beautiful Michael..love and hope go hand in hand.. Tracie xxx

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/26/2011 5:59:00 AM

This is a new favorite for me Michael.. Awesome piece, I quite enjoyed it.. Love the title as well.. I almost feel like saying "play on" ;) love Wilma