Just Missing You

just missing you teacher,how far apart we are
We still have our heart my dear,but only half
Your near the nile,i'm in denial,it's rainy
but it is the u.k,oh no oh dear,i thought i was at the nile
I miss you my friend,my teacher,my all
but do not worry princess,i heard your soft clear call

Goodbye for now,i'll see you soon,keep safe my dear,and i'll dream of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 29, 2014 at 11:34 PM
TERENCE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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November 30, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Thank you.Really enjoy the people and poems on here.Most sites or pages on facebook can really discourage you,so getting messages like this and positive feedback is really encouraging,and a little inspiring if i'm honest.I will of course drop you a message telling you a little about myself.Friends for sure,and more,i'm a fan.Hugs and all the best.
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November 26, 2014 at 7:41 PM
Very nice pen Terence! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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November 26, 2014 at 9:33 AM
lovely message.. :) welcome to poetrysoup. :)!
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November 26, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Really appreciated olive. Great name by the way.
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November 24, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Keep sharing your poetry, please! You have a lovely way of writing. This is a very sweet poem. I agree that it flows quite nicely. Very warm welcomes to the site, Terence. Always, Laura
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November 23, 2014 at 9:44 AM
I loved the way it flowed and the clear message. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.
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November 23, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so so much.I have been to shy to show people my poetry in the past,a friend mentioned poetrysoup and it is as welcoming and the people are as nice as she said.Again thank you.
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November 23, 2014 at 4:59 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Terence - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 23, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Thank you Anne,means a'lot.
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:09 AM
lovely romantic poem:-) I hope you meet again soon. Hugs jan xx
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November 23, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thanks so much jan.All the very best to you.
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November 22, 2014 at 2:19 AM
Nice, feel good poem, Terence. Looking forward to more creations by you. Kim Patrice :)
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November 23, 2014 at 12:33 PM
Thank you,i have over 100 written but have never showed anyone apart from the girl this one was written for.A friend mentioned this site so i thought i would test the water so to speak with 2 poems i wrote quickly and this one i wrote last year.You have all been fantastic,and i appreciate it a'lot.
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