Just Me

Every day I feel empty inside
Beaten by the world's eyes
Where I want to die
Cause if I'm me
and do my best to try
Why live for that resort of "paradise"?

Why not rise above the shallow end 
but travel among the treasures that
lay forgotten in our depths?
The countless hours someone has denied 
their way to live
And what clothes they set out to dirty 
There's a long list of which the troubled ones
don't give

When were thirteen, we strive for thirty 
To pass the phase of "growing up"
Becoming the man or woman we are
Many reasons may be behind my fears
But it's really my faults that have developed 
me over my sixteen years
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 28, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Another entry that needs review.. Nice creativity is displayed here... You are to be proud of this and other work in your portfolio....Don't be discouraged... followers will come to your page and discover your talent..... Jake
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