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Just Like You

Just Like You I saw this picture was thinking of you There is beauty and strength just like you. It lights up so many lives, Which is just like you The new Days Sun Is stunningly beautiful Just like you The next time you look outside And see the beautiful sun know that I am thinking of something beautiful I am so glad its you Ive never written poetry, never thought of a verse Since you've come in to my life thoughts that I have Are all brand new I am sure you must think Who is this guy So fast he says I Love you... This new kindred lover You know what he is saying? The thoughts I have Have long been there I've been waiting so long I need to share Love at first sight Or a gleeful new found friend (LOL) Whatever it is I am so glad you've arrived Thank You For "being.. just you"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/21/2009 4:47:00 AM
This is wonderful. I really like the the flow of the poem and the theme. Welcome to poetrysoup. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:48:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlie. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:28:00 PM
well written. i like..a lot. Autumn
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:10:00 PM
Charlie , this one is so so sweet I can feel your tenderness...!!! Thank you !!
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:34:00 PM
Nicely done. I especially liked the last stanza. Keep writing. Sara
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