Just Like a Wave

Just like a wave,
The love I crave,
Rise's up fast,
and doesnt last.

Just like a wave,
The passion I crave,
Makes me a slave,
and dribbles back.

Just like the rain,
I crash to the ground,
there isnt a sound,
Its all in my mind.

Just like the rain,
I do feel the pain,
Im viewd as a stain,
until the sun dries me away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Raiken Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 8:30 AM
This is beyond incredible, Dylan. You've truly outdone yourself this time. This captures stong yet sullen emotions in a captivating rhyme-scheme with a beautiful relation to nature. Love, Erika.
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June 28, 2010 at 11:00 PM
this is awesome,,just went out for a visit on the beach shores the other day,,,enjoyed your poemm,,you captured the life of a way pretty good if you ask me,,lovely,..Sidney LeeAnn
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