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Just Like a Wave

Just like a wave, The love I crave, Rise's up fast, and doesnt last. Just like a wave, The passion I crave, Makes me a slave, and dribbles back. Just like the rain, I crash to the ground, there isnt a sound, Its all in my mind. Just like the rain, I do feel the pain, Im viewd as a stain, until the sun dries me away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2011 8:30:00 AM
This is beyond incredible, Dylan. You've truly outdone yourself this time. This captures stong yet sullen emotions in a captivating rhyme-scheme with a beautiful relation to nature. Love, Erika.
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Date: 6/28/2010 11:00:00 PM
this is awesome,,just went out for a visit on the beach shores the other day,,,enjoyed your poemm,,you captured the life of a way pretty good if you ask me,,lovely,..Sidney LeeAnn
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