Written, October 5, 2024 For The Premiere Contest, “Trionet” - Form Created by L Milton Hankins Sponsor, Emile Pinet
Just like a halo on Horizon's edge, the sky of gold unveils an orange glow as though Almighty God stands on that ledge, just like a halo on Horizon's edge to shine His blessings gifted by His pledge, while wind-blown grass and cattails stand below. Just like a halo on Horizon's edge- the sky of gold unveils an orange glow. Just like a halo on Horizon's edge, as though almighty God stands on that ledge to shine his blessings gifted by His pledge, while wind-blown grass and cattails stand below- the sky of gold unveils an orange glow with splendors of His beams that overflow.
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