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Written, October 5, 2024
For The Premiere Contest, “Trionet” -  Form Created by L Milton Hankins 
Sponsor, Emile Pinet

Just like a halo on Horizon's edge, the sky of gold unveils an orange glow as though Almighty God stands on that ledge, just like a halo on Horizon's edge to shine His blessings gifted by His pledge, while wind-blown grass and cattails stand below. Just like a halo on Horizon's edge- the sky of gold unveils an orange glow. Just like a halo on Horizon's edge, as though almighty God stands on that ledge to shine his blessings gifted by His pledge, while wind-blown grass and cattails stand below- the sky of gold unveils an orange glow with splendors of His beams that overflow.

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Date: 10/29/2024 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra! Your unique spiritual poem, "Just Like A Halo," won third place in my contest. Well done. Soupmail me for your prize, my friend. Emile.
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Date: 10/8/2024 11:42:00 AM
This is so beautiful and flows effortlessly, Sandra, it has the quality of a hymn. Love it. X Su
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