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Just Like a Cigarette

I drown in tears I shed for you You drown in clouds of smoke I suffer when I look at you You suffer when you choke There's pain in every screaming lung There's sorrow in my heart For everytime you take a puff Your breaking it apart Don't you know your life is changing With every smoke you get Your life is getting ever shorter Just like a cigarette _Tamara Brown_

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/10/2016 1:50:00 AM
well done Tamara. linda
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:47:00 AM
Hmm.. tell you I like this...Your life is getting shorter/ just like a cigarette. So true, keep writing, Tamara
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