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I have never seen so many Of my family in one place Our little house is so full That there’s very little space My brothers and my sisters Aunts and Uncles, cousins too Friends I knew from years ago I can’t believe this is true Their lips are busy moving But I don’t hear a noise Seems this room of people Have all lost their voice They’re filling up their glasses While smiling all the time As someone in the kitchen Opens another bottle of wine I try to join festivities To grab a piece of cake This feat too beyond me These people are at my Wake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/13/2014 11:51:00 AM
Surprise ending didn't expect that kind of creeps up on you great poem friend Maddie
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 5/13/2014 4:35:00 PM
thank you for commenting on my poem Maddie. Glad you enjoyed it. Andy
Date: 5/11/2014 7:41:00 PM
Andy if and when they have a wake for you Peter and I will be there in spirit, but I think we will go before you, great poem, I love the way you write, it is so easy to understand, thank you and take care..........Vera..............
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Date: 5/13/2014 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Vera that's how I will be there too. That is the amazing thing Vera we never know when we will be called. Thank you for popping by glad you enjoyed the poem, regards to Peter and take good care of yourselves. Andy

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