Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Just Jotting Lines

Blood red sun peeks through silhouetted pines
Lavender frosts the eastern sky
Crepe Myrtle blossoms line the drive 
Time in the hour glass marches by

The summer sun has changed to orange
As it rises higher still
The gray wolf's eye sky looks innocent
As it coats each and every hill

The roosters' voices fall flat in the hollow
The air hangs heavy today
Song birds add their dimension
As tunes begin to play

Bright yellow-orange sun is higher
It shines over the tops of trees
What will this day offer
Will its plot be sure to please 

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Robert Lindley July 28, 2015 at 11:30 PM WOW!! Please teach me how to jot like that! Love this one and now adding this beauty to my fav list. A7

Afolabi Muideen July 28, 2015 at 5:50 PM Your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers, this precious write is intriguing. Excellent.........A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 9:10 AM Sara, I love the imagery and again I don't need the picture, your poetry brings me there!~Olive Eloisa.. =)

Howard Tunick July 26, 2015 at 7:10 PM Just as poetry should be.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2015 at 1:51 PM - I hope your day will be as beautiful as your poem - Your nature poems is always a pleasure to read, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 1:20 PM The imagery gave me a shiver down my spine Sara - simply breathtaking!:-) hugs jan xx7