Just Imagine

Just imagine

in the deepest night
the moon she is a goddess
silver hair needs star combs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 4:03 AM
I do not fully understand the exact requirements of the Haiku...but you do write such compelling little three-liners, Patricia. My warmest affections. :) john
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October 15, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Hhmmm...food for thought perhaps.
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October 15, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Three lines, 5/7/5 syllables, usually twist ending. You re curious why not just go all to heck with yourself write a few. No one ever has to know if you find it is not your style. Can't wait to read. Thank you John.
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