Just Hangin' Around

Here I hang permanently latched to this coat peg
while fumbling though my mind what I did wrong.
Oh please release me I constantly meow and beg
but to no avail no one heeds my lonely cat song,
so I may be hanging freely my lifelong.

As I now recall, I went on a mouse strike
I refused to eat the gray furry critter.
Packed my vittles and headed off on my bike
until I was retrieved by my little sitter,
so now I hang here like a piece of litter.

For punishment she dressed me in overhauls and shirt
and hung me on this hook for my timeout.
I loathe being clothed, I am glad it is not a skirt
it would be quite airy no doubt,
so I will hang here and quietly pout.

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Aug. 3, 2011

Fourth Place Winner ~ "Hangin' in there" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Francine Roberts
Aug. 29, 2011
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Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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November 15, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Congrats Caryl on a super big win in the contest with this delightful entry my friend.. kudos on the win luv..
Horne Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Many congrats, Caryl : )
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Congrats on your creative win..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Hangin In There" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 5:35 AM
cuteness, caryl!! laurels for you on the fine, fine win! :) huggs!
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August 10, 2011 at 12:57 AM
Guess he learned his lesson and will be "mousing" again, Caryl. Cute take on the contest and congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:15 AM
congrats on your 4th place win in the contest Caryl , loved the last line
Culverhouse Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 11:50 AM
funny and cute one!! enjoyed!
Mehta Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, Caryl
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