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to feel illusion we pause in melancholy how fake can we get to feel sudden rage awareness veiled by ego great bed time story animal cravings erst instincts from which risen shudder of horror delusion dispelled in the void of staid stillness bubbling bliss bursts forth 14-March-2021

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Date: 3/16/2021 5:26:00 PM
That first stanza, combined with the picture, really grabbed me. Excellent haikus, Seeker! :) gw
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Date: 3/16/2021 7:16:00 PM
Essentially a witness stance, wherein we look at mind body urges from a neutral vantage point, in but not within, the play underway
Date: 3/14/2021 3:54:00 PM
Much gleams from your write, US--so deep in thoughts.
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Date: 3/14/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, happy you enjoyed!
Date: 3/14/2021 10:20:00 AM
Great thoughts Unseeking Seeker. Loved the last stanza specially.... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/14/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Anitha!

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