Janice Canerdy Poet Senryu

Just For Fun

glad you forgave me
thanks so much for the wine--gee
it sure tastes funny

princess who smooched prince
morphed into a--ribbit--frog
magic gone awry

thanks for listening
just needing some good advice--
pastor, you still there?

birthday girl age three
waist deep in expensive gifts
plays with bags and bows

big bright birthday bash
gifts cake punch games raging blaze
ninety five candles

These may not meet the strictest standards for senryu!

May 28, 2018--not for a contest

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Vijay Pandit May 28, 2018 at 3:41 PM And it is a fun poem to read! Janice Canerdy May 28, 2018 at 3:46 PM Thanks! Glad you liked it, Vijay! Janice

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2018 at 2:29 PM I'm such a boring sinner. heehee Janice Canerdy May 28, 2018 at 3:21 PM Me too--now! Janice

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2018 at 2:29 PM Yes, they were very fun. Loved the pastor one. I imagined talking and talking behind some confessional wall and then realize the guy is not even there listening!! Janice Canerdy May 28, 2018 at 3:01 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice