Anonomus Scorpio Poet Rhyme

Just Follies

What do I see when I look into the persistence of memories?
Does it carry the same effect if my eyes were microwaved?
Would the clocks be suddenly corrected
Or shall they be straighter than the vision of Dali's
Melting in the feelings of the sunlight should they be saved?
Mine are are mine, though no matter how they're erected
Give it your best shot; to understand if their just follies

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Paige Hind July 5, 2024 at 6:27 PM Poignant, so much said in little words... :) <3 Paige Hind July 6, 2024 at 4:04 PM You're so brilliant, lol. And thanks to you, too! :) Anonomus Scorpio July 5, 2024 at 8:10 PM I was having fun with a friend who told me that I reminded them of Salvador Dali' as far as how my mind works lol. They told me a poets mind is like melting clocks. To which I wrote this poem in response finding deep humor in the analogy and reference... I am still giggling lol. Thank you once again for seeing the truest of who I am. A.S.