Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Just Five Lines

Just five lines to let you know,

To tell you how I feel.

Of how you make me feel alive, 

And true happiness is real.

With love, all is revealed.










Entry for
When line five enables your poem 
To thrive Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent one.
16/6/18. Placed 2nd.

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Susan Gentry June 21, 2018 at 5:05 PM Congratulations on your win with this awesome love poem, all in 5 lines. Well done! Gary Smith June 21, 2018 at 5:34 PM Thank you Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2018 at 3:20 PM very nice. I love five lines so short and sweet. Congrats! Gary Smith June 19, 2018 at 3:26 PM Thank you Andrea :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 18, 2018 at 9:14 AM Lovely piece Gary! Congratulations on your win :) xomo Gary Smith June 18, 2018 at 9:28 AM Thank you Maureen :)

Kim Rodrigues June 17, 2018 at 8:34 PM Lovely lines, Gary! Congrats! Gary Smith June 18, 2018 at 4:55 AM Thank you Kim :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2018 at 12:35 PM - I visit your poem Gary, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith June 17, 2018 at 12:38 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands June 17, 2018 at 11:25 AM Back to say Congratulations for your win Gary :) Gary Smith June 17, 2018 at 11:41 AM Thank you Heidi :)

Silent One June 17, 2018 at 6:21 AM Very sweet Gary.. Hope she heard you.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Gary Smith June 17, 2018 at 7:19 AM Thank you Silent One :)

Heidi Sands June 16, 2018 at 4:39 AM Well written Gary! Good luck in the contest :) Gary Smith June 16, 2018 at 4:42 AM Thank you Heidi :)