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Just Five Lines

Just five lines to let you know, To tell you how I feel. Of how you make me feel alive, And true happiness is real. With love, all is revealed. Entry for When line five enables your poem To thrive Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent one. 16/6/18. Placed 2nd.

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Date: 6/21/2018 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome love poem, all in 5 lines. Well done!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/21/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 6/19/2018 3:20:00 PM
very nice. I love five lines so short and sweet. Congrats!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/19/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 6/18/2018 9:14:00 AM
Lovely piece Gary! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/18/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 6/17/2018 8:34:00 PM
Lovely lines, Gary! Congrats!
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/18/2018 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 6/17/2018 12:35:00 PM
- I visit your poem Gary, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/17/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/17/2018 11:25:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations for your win Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/17/2018 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 6/17/2018 6:21:00 AM
Very sweet Gary.. Hope she heard you.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/17/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Silent One :)
Date: 6/16/2018 4:39:00 AM
Well written Gary! Good luck in the contest :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 6/16/2018 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)

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