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Just Distraction

Upon a rock I made my bed Not seeking to be comforted, If so I'd have a quilt of down And a feather pillow for a crown. But no, I want it bare and stark I want to wear the boulders mark, To feel a different kind of pain Distraction for my mind again. No solace comes with passing time Just confusion in my mind, Life can bring such bitter sorrow As it will again tomorrow. Passing years bring scant relief So heavy on my shoulders, grief. Thus has brought me to this action No easing it, just distraction.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/24/2020 4:41:00 AM
Glad to see your competent first write, Gary. Perfectly metered. Pain told with whimsy. Will be looking up your work, as it's clear to see your skill.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/24/2020 5:21:00 AM
Thank you Sigrid. :)
Date: 8/24/2020 3:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Gary ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2020 5:21:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 8/24/2020 3:39:00 AM
A deeply emotive first post Gary... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/24/2020 5:21:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 5/28/2019 5:53:00 PM
This definitely worthy of a placement, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 5/28/2019 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Ralph. :)

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