Just Couldn'T

Demon slither
inside my heart
for your hands grasp me
and make me part
Did you know demon
I do not fight your place
for the reason of your being
was my own mistake
and if I could tell myself:
"Bow If love never came."
I really think my reality
would rather have me maimed
and even though small demon
you could leave me if I stop
...I just couldn't stand the feeling
of having this broken heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 13, 2010 at 4:05 AM
I admire the way you take responsibility for your own actions, Jessica. You could teach Congress a lesson. Great write! Love, Carolyn
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July 12, 2010 at 11:47 PM
Dear Jessica, Superb Write, clear Imagery keep the Golden Pen of POETRY moving Thank -YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM " Punkuation and Speling " If YOU have time YOU should read my Hodge-Podge POEMS or My Letter POEMS F Words S Words and E I will read more of YOU YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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