Just Believing

What is the world without wonder
or for no sense in needing to get up?
How many takes to pull you under
until you fight back and feel abrupt?
You have to be without breathing
having to hold all in, just believing
Last as long as you possibly can
for opportunity does not repeat again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 13, 2013 at 12:18 PM
wow...interesting...PD
Dua Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 11:27 AM
"!!!" :p
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 12:58 PM
Gigno well done I like it...David
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April 5, 2013 at 11:31 PM
you get to catch the moment-a nice message here Gignio
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Determined.......you are friend....keep believing..very nice
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