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on the beautiful glisten of new-fallen snow. . . my dog takes a whiz Dec. 21, 2018 for Winter Haiku Poetry Contest, Sponsor Tania

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Date: 12/24/2018 10:04:00 PM
I can only echo Caren's words. You have borrowed a page from Jan and Nina's notebooks---and left this reader laughing hysterically! Great one! Happy Holidays, Andrea. ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/22/2018 2:54:00 PM
Hello Andrea, yep! Dogs take a whiz in the snow. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:35:00 AM
Hahahahaha... Beautiful! So beautiful.. Wishing you a merry christmas and a wonderful 2019
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:15:00 AM
No snow ice cream there. Enjoyed reading your humorous work. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 12/21/2018 9:11:00 PM
Wait a second. I had to re-read the author's name three times. I thought Nina, then I thought Jan. I never suspected to find Andrea doing something like this. Andrea, Andrea, Andrea, this delighted me, that it was yours.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2018 2:15:00 PM
lol Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/21/2018 8:24:00 PM
I thought That I am reading Jan's poem, but it yours... LOL... Happy Holidays.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/26/2018 9:04:00 PM
LOL...
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2018 2:15:00 PM
oh dear I am blushing lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/21/2018 5:37:00 PM
I can relate to this haiku. Lol. Very nicely written and good imagery.
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:03:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2018 1:08:00 PM
Lol! LOVE IT! ;D xomo
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Date: 12/21/2018 12:59:00 PM
Love the way your poem builds to a crescendo of glorious awe only to be brutally let down. Very funny how you toy with us, Andrea.
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:01:00 AM
Dogs know the beautiful..great haiku, Andrea.
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Date: 12/21/2018 9:39:00 AM
Didn't stay beautiful for long lol. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas Andrea. Tom.
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