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Just Beautiful

on the beautiful

glisten of new-fallen snow. . . 

my dog takes a whiz


Dec. 21, 2018 for Winter Haiku Poetry Contest, Sponsor Tania

snowhaiku

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/24/2018 10:04:00 PM

I can only echo Caren's words. You have borrowed a page from Jan and Nina's notebooks---and left this reader laughing hysterically! Great one! Happy Holidays, Andrea. ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/22/2018 2:54:00 PM

Hello Andrea, yep! Dogs take a whiz in the snow. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Have a nice evening my friend.

Funom Makama

Date: 12/22/2018 9:35:00 AM

Hahahahaha... Beautiful! So beautiful.. Wishing you a merry christmas and a wonderful 2019

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2018 9:15:00 AM

No snow ice cream there. Enjoyed reading your humorous work. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/21/2018 9:11:00 PM

Wait a second. I had to re-read the author's name three times. I thought Nina, then I thought Jan. I never suspected to find Andrea doing something like this. Andrea, Andrea, Andrea, this delighted me, that it was yours.