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Just Be You

Is it really me you think you see, When you tell me where you want to be , Because I don't really think you see at all . I think you look and that's as much , As you can do without the touch , Of someone else's mind , It's someone else's call . To me your not really awake , Living for another's sake , Doing the things you think they want from you . I know that somewhere in your sole , If you for once would take control , The truth is that your scared to be that true .

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Date: 3/19/2012 6:29:00 PM
I know many like this...I might fall into this habit myself at times. Excellent poem and great advice. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/20/2012 6:17:00 AM
Thankyou Laura. Your comments are both kind and respected. Writing releases me , where as reading comments thrills me. Especially from one so talented as yourself. Thankyou for that. Warren.

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