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Just Awhile

just awhile the beach was so peaceful as I watched sitting on the shore capturing each wave as it crashed no two alike, each distinct in it's own way the cool breeze upon my face takes my mind acrossed the ocean where you can leave everything behind for just awhile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/2/2010 11:12:00 PM
great title for this one, you really captured the mood!
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:59:00 AM
SOOTHING THOUGHTS TO THIS, A WALK ON THE BEACH WOULD BE NICE RIGHT NOW-SKAT
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