Just Awhile

just awhile

the beach was so peaceful
as I watched sitting on the shore
capturing each wave as it crashed
no two alike, each distinct
in it's own way
the cool breeze upon
my face takes my mind
acrossed the ocean
where you can leave everything
behind for just awhile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:12 PM
great title for this one, you really captured the mood!
A  Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 8:59 AM
SOOTHING THOUGHTS TO THIS, A WALK ON THE BEACH WOULD BE NICE RIGHT NOW-SKAT
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