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Just a Weed

Dandiest of lions, roaming freely in your fertile field, Feral kitty don’t succumb to pressure, let not your spirit yield, Lie in the sun, relax, repose, You are of the field, as of the garden is the rose.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 5/21/2019 11:02:00 AM

A terse verse that delightfully reveals natures well placed values, accordingly, William, Aloha wk

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/20/2019 10:56:00 PM

William, I am a fan of this weed, and now this blooming poem. -Richard

Wendy Watson

Date: 5/20/2019 4:48:00 PM

I love this portrayal of the dandelion, William which as you imply, is often treated with disdain despite having valuable uses. I can see beauty in the simple wildflowers just as much as the most expensive rose. A short and sweet poem but so well executed.

Djeli Forchion
Date: 5/20/2019 5:46:00 PM

thank you for appreciating the majesty of the dandelion. Thank you for the kind words. wf