Just a Thought

For if it is said the seasons and the sky affect our mind and soul,
Then cannot the same be true, 
that our mind and soul affect the sky and her seasons?
For are we not born as one, each existing because of the other?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 27, 2010 at 3:34 AM
Hum? Interesting thought in these words, Madelynn TJ. This reminds me of the scripture that says "...with faith, you can remove mountains..." And we can! With dynamite, which is perhaps a product of someone's faith. You have written some thought provoking words in this one. Smiles, Dane Ann (soup mail)
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December 8, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Madelynn, Hummmm.. Interesting thought! Something new to ponder. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane (soup mail.)
Wordslinger Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 3:36 AM
I love this, I believe you are right, ty WS
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November 12, 2009 at 8:17 AM
wonderful thought, TJ, very poignant words.. thankxxx for your comments on my poem today... hope u enjoy reading others as I will yours... good day .. Linda=Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGDaniel Esquire.. check out his "Daffy Definitions" and Dane Ann Smith Johnsen "Our Many Blessings" to contribute if u have not done so already... excellent write..
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