Just a Little Sip (Haiku)

The golden moth lights
upon clustered white blossoms; 
sipping sweet nectar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 19, 2008 at 5:58 PM
Beautiful imagery paints a picture with words in this one. Nice use of this short format. Good job! Karen
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September 12, 2008 at 7:52 PM
Wonderful Haiku Adell - God bless you my dear supportive friend
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September 11, 2008 at 6:02 PM
beautiful and sweet write and thank you for your welcome comments, D-nyce
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September 10, 2008 at 2:01 PM
Petty picture. Nature is awesome. Lovely haiku. Love, Shar
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September 10, 2008 at 7:51 AM
Adell , you're on a Haiku roll here.... Slainte ...
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