Just a Little Peck

Always better to live in shadows 
Even though shadows can not be hidden

Only living in darkness
we see the light of promise and solstice 

We comprise our soul and self belief 
with love that must shine without doubt
 
Spiraling angel dust sparkling magic
Fallen in mystic theology the man must lay his sword from grace

With warm purity in his heart 
chasing away the demons as they only lay for you

A thousand songs of midnight chimes 
gently they toll under the moon's grace

Where the sparkles shine bright for many's a year 
I remember holding your body tight
 
Where we will dance cheek to cheek forever 
embraced deep down beautiful always right  

To love and follow one's heart and desires 
is to take an angel's hand kissing her fingertips 

With the softest touch
one touch is never enough.......


Co written by David Bucknell and Liam Mc Daid.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 6:03 AM
wow..what a beautiful write...love this..rating..
Mcdaid Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 1:32 PM
a blessing your comment thank you smiles
Devnath  Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 11:20 AM
A great band of two poets adorned a beautiful picture of devotion to pleasure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Gupta Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 5:01 AM
Reading this poem is a great pleasure. Rich in images. Some poetic lines one would like to save under memorable quotes.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Courteous and smooth with images I see.
Adewuyi Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Great Work!
Mothiba Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 4:08 AM
I LOVE THIS ROMANTIC POEM ,KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK STAY BLESSED KOENA THE POET
Gentry Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:42 PM
What a beautiful poem, romantic, pure images. "Spiraling angel dust sparkling magic" - I love it! Lovely, both of you.
Rabura Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 12:54 PM
lovely,every word flows :) awesome
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:00 AM
What a great Colaboration! Congratulations on your lifetime Premium membership.
Dibaba Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Dear Liam and david, I congratulate you both on this wonderful uplifting piece. It is inspiring with awe ...it soaks slowly but deeply like the Autumnal rain ...i like the move between the "We" the "I" the "You," ending with the "She" ....and there it ends without ending...the end is the starting point. I enjoyed your "Just a Little Peck" and rate it at 7! Thank you for inviting me Ase
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 3:57 PM
- Beautiful and romantic, David & Liam - "To love and follow one's heart and desires is to take an angel's hand kissing her fingertips" ........ favorite lines :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend, Liam (and David) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Hi Liam n' David! This is a very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam, and this time in collaboration with your friend David.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome! I truly enjoyed it!A true golden gem! Very enchanting!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it! This is so very beautiful and sweet.Just wonderful!Superb imagery!Very enchanting!Outstanding collaboration!Just excellent!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav!Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers Liam!Keep your Faith!Keep your love hopes n' dreams always too:))Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Just Beautiful!!!
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