Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Just a Little Bit of Sugar-'sugar Slave'

Sunshine smiling smarties on sugary snowy slopes
Eating éclair evenings where everyone elopes
Cotton Candy climbing with cascading caramel
Delicious dancing donuts devilishly desirable

Jumping jealous jellybeans jousting with the jujubes
And tasty toffee truffles taunting the tootsie roll tubes
What a Wonderful Wunderbar World of Mr. Willy Wonka
A virile victorious vision before we get to the Vodka.




Feb.18.2017
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Kai Michael Neumann February 27, 2017 at 1:38 AM Great. I do not know, what you call lines with words starting with the same letter, but this is very clever. Congratulations, Kai

Gregory Richard Barden February 26, 2017 at 4:13 PM Whimsical and sweet - love it! Congrats, W2!

James Inman February 26, 2017 at 12:56 PM A little bit of adult sweets thrown in. Nice write.

Richard Lamoureux February 20, 2017 at 8:58 AM Yum yum! An irresistible sweet treat you have penned!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 20, 2017 at 2:14 AM Love the sweet, delectable humor of this fun write, WW! Sending a hug and thanks for your visits always, Rhonda

Daniel Turner February 19, 2017 at 7:23 PM Just open a bag of sugar and dig in Wingman:) A very mouthwatering read!

Jan Allison February 19, 2017 at 1:04 PM I'm heading for my sweetie drawer now - a poem as cute as cotton candy - love it ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud February 19, 2017 at 8:35 AM you are on a sugar binge, WW... delectable poem with wonderful use of alliteration... huggs