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Just a Glimmer

Lantern in blue haze,
oil flame spirit glow, last ditch
tunnel ray of hope

Posted ; 1st April 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:23 PM
oh it is good to have that last hope before you! Nicely done.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Seems a spiritual poem! If the lantern is filled the Holy Spirit is with you and will take you home when Jesus comes! Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my short story written quite a while ago! So glad you enjoyed it! Blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 4:37 PM
I like the snapshot and the poem that you have written to go with it. That is a very interesting sky. There is just a small patch of hope in the overcast sky for sure. Thanks for your visits to my pages ..Sara
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