Just a Facade

Chilvary met it's demise
Once the words "I Do" was declared
And his diamond cuff was secured
On her left third finger with care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Oimbo Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 7:40 AM
This is a real creative work full of deep imagery. "third finger" is very important here
Peranteau Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Thank you
Palmer Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Diamond cuff,,,wonderful write JoanMarie
Peranteau Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you.
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