"just a Dream"

When I went to sleep
Had no idea what I'd see
On the other side 
In the darkness as I lie
Was a vision of you
Etched in my mind

As I tossed and I turned
I felt the deep burn
Like a candle in the wind
I started to squirm

I saw this vision of you
That was so real and so true
Never felt so alive
As I slept with eyes wide

Where was I now?
I was deep in the clouds....

As I floated so high
High up in the sky
I felt your touch on my cheek
It made me dizzy and weak

You smiled so brightly
With a gleam in your eye
When you kissed my lips 
I started to cry

My heart skipped a beat
As I started to weep
I felt you wash all my tears
And take all my fears
Then all of a sudden 
You just disappeared

I turned to see
Where you had went
You returned to heaven
As you'd been sent

As I opened my eyes
And started to see
Nothing was real
Or as it had seemed

This vision I had was all, Just A Dream....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/4/2011 5:01:00 AM
beautifully delineated.....! I really like it. I hope i will be fortunate to read more from you in future too..........!
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Date: 1/12/2010 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful Stephen! Keep writing...
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Date: 12/29/2009 2:35:00 PM
Interesting write. Could go several different ways in the interpertation. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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