Brandee Augustus Poet Rhyme

Just a Dream

DOugh is my motivation when I'm workin' in the hot RAys of the desert sun.
If it where up to ME I'd prefer to relax on the soFA and be one---
with my thoughts SO I can truly feel clear and dream free.
And hum LA TI DA as I sit back and sip my ice tea.
Then I realize I'm still in that heat only to get my DOugh in that desert sun.


(My attempt at Solfege)

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Michael Jordan August 14, 2009 at 9:40 PM Brandee congratulations on placing in the contest -God Bless, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown August 14, 2009 at 8:28 AM Congratulations on your win in Izzy's contest Brandee. Love, Carol

Brian Strand August 14, 2009 at 1:34 AM Congrats on your success in Izzy's contest Brandee.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen August 13, 2009 at 2:57 PM This was fun, Brandee. The Solfege contest was such a challenge for me. I love this one because it meets the requirements, reads easily, and adds in a bit of fun. Very nice. Love, Dane (soupmail, soon!)

Carrie Richards August 13, 2009 at 1:08 PM This was fun to read! Great job! Congratulations on your win in Izzy's contest!!

August 13, 2009 at 1:03 PM You've got me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen August 13, 2009 at 9:25 AM This is a winner, Brandee! Congratulations on your placement in the solfege poetry contest. Lovingly, DAS-J

Sue Mason August 6, 2009 at 9:14 AM Very, very clever write here, Brandee!! The way you worked the scale through is just brillant ... smile ...

Trudy Diane Rider August 3, 2009 at 4:33 PM very creative solfege here! you did a great job! ~Trudy~

Kristopher S. Kern July 18, 2009 at 9:20 AM Yeah the beating sun can be too much especially when we're working in it...thanks for comments,they're most appreciated...Kris

Diane Christian July 4, 2009 at 12:02 PM aww it's so hot at the moment, it makes you feel urrrrrrrrrr a powerful write, God bless you

John Freeman July 4, 2009 at 11:49 AM I think I get your message! Love Moses