Just a Dream

DOugh is my motivation when I'm workin' in the hot RAys of the desert sun.
If it where up to ME I'd prefer to relax on the soFA and be one---
with my thoughts SO I can truly feel clear and dream free.
And hum LA TI DA as I sit back and sip my ice tea.
Then I realize I'm still in that heat only to get my DOugh in that desert sun.


(My attempt at Solfege)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/14/2009 9:40:00 PM
Brandee congratulations on placing in the contest -God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Izzy's contest Brandee. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:34:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Izzy's contest Brandee.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/13/2009 2:57:00 PM
This was fun, Brandee. The Solfege contest was such a challenge for me. I love this one because it meets the requirements, reads easily, and adds in a bit of fun. Very nice. Love, Dane (soupmail, soon!)
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:08:00 PM
This was fun to read! Great job! Congratulations on your win in Izzy's contest!!
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:03:00 PM
You've got me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 8/13/2009 9:25:00 AM
This is a winner, Brandee! Congratulations on your placement in the solfege poetry contest. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:14:00 AM
Very, very clever write here, Brandee!! The way you worked the scale through is just brillant ... smile ...
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:33:00 PM
very creative solfege here! you did a great job! ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/18/2009 9:20:00 AM
Yeah the beating sun can be too much especially when we're working in it...thanks for comments,they're most appreciated...Kris
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Date: 7/4/2009 12:02:00 PM
aww it's so hot at the moment, it makes you feel urrrrrrrrrr a powerful write, God bless you
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Date: 7/4/2009 11:49:00 AM
I think I get your message! Love Moses
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