Just a Crack

life struggling beneath the frozen water
winter blues surround the lake
just a crack pours life back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats on your win..Sara
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 6:01 AM
Love this Irfana.Congrats on your in the contest.
Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:51 PM
many congrats on your win in the contest Irfana
A   Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Irfana.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:23 PM
this was so good, Irfana. congrats on the HM.
Merryman Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Congrats on your HM, Irfana! Love, Kim
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Congrats on your win. Connie
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:57 AM
beautiful struggle...the last statement..give it an amazing punch...i soo love it :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:56 AM
Even though you represented struggle I somehow found this poem very serene. I enjoyed it very much.
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