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Just a Thought

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                                           War with roars, shouts
                                         Angel so afraid just prays
                                               Man oblivious



(The man thinks it is just a strong wind.)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2010 9:27:00 AM

That is just a tought, very high on his ego. Good morning Sara, you have alot of poems. here i am enjoyign this Beautiful Sunday,..p..d

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/10/2010 3:40:00 AM

Well written Senryu which leaves us pensive, Sara! Hope you'll have a nice week ahead...Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/3/2010 4:24:00 PM

what your wrote here is so true, we're sometime too oblivious, & that's such a scary thought--& you're so right too, sometimes it's just so hard not to be anxious...always have to keep in mind that God is always there for us--thanks for all your comments Sara :)

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 5/3/2010 9:15:00 AM

niice write!..it leaves the mind open to so many different images!..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 5:36:00 AM

where did this come from? enjoyed

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/2/2010 6:49:00 PM

war of principalities. Well done Sara -Robert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2010 6:39:00 PM

Best in the contest.

David Byrne

Date: 5/2/2010 6:24:00 PM

love it!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2010 2:10:00 PM

Great photo revealed in words by u Sara.. if u entered in the contest ...good luck... the explanation was cool... enjoyed.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Danny Nunn

Date: 5/2/2010 1:03:00 PM

A lot to think about here in a few short words, good write..thanks on Laws..I agree with you to a point on the death pen.,,,they tried to put me on Texas Death Row here a few years ago, so I know how that feels? But here we have a war.a example needs to bet set....the only thing those people understand..thanks Danny