CayCay Godwin Poet Verse

Jupiter

Jewel is largest orb,
Jazzed third bright in night sky,
Juts in fifth place from sun.
Joins name of Roman god.
Jam rules Sag and Pisces;
Jells expansion and grace,
Jives like a lucky star.




March 5, 2017

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Kim Merryman / Pleiades J

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Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 2:34 PM Lovely unique topic, CayCay. Congrats on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:22 AM - Congratulations on your win, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White March 7, 2017 at 11:15 PM Wonderful CayCay. I always like how you manage to get the strangest words in, and still it flows naturally. Congratulations :)

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 9:00 PM Creative description of the planet Jupiter, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Janis Medders Tobechi March 7, 2017 at 8:12 PM Congratulations on your win with this well formed pleiades.

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:56 PM Nicely done, CayCay, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 6:56 PM I love learning about our solar system, and your poem really described Jupiter so well! Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2017 at 8:44 AM This one is JAZZY snazzy, Caycay. Love the use of JIVE in there!! I was wanting to put in mine "Jam up and jelly tight" like in the song!

Connie Marcum Wong March 6, 2017 at 4:53 AM Oh, I love to read about the planets CayCay. I sure hope this one does real well! I loved it! : ) 7

Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 5:52 PM Great take on the J theme CayCay - this is the first one I've seen for the planet:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx CayCay Godwin March 5, 2017 at 5:54 PM Oh, good - maybe I'm the only Jupiter! I was number 35 and sent the contest on to its next phase (I had the power - ain't that cool?). Good luck to you always and hugs ... CayCay

Heidi Sands March 5, 2017 at 5:40 PM Wow, great one CayCay. :) CayCay Godwin March 5, 2017 at 5:52 PM Hey, thanks, Heidi! I just now 'cast' this poem and to get a nibble so quickly - well, that hasn't happened to me much and I kinda like it! Thanks and thanks and hugs ... CayCay