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Jewel is largest orb, Jazzed third bright in night sky, Juts in fifth place from sun. Joins name of Roman god. Jam rules Sag and Pisces; Jells expansion and grace, Jives like a lucky star. March 5, 2017 howmanysyllables.com Kim Merryman / Pleiades J

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Date: 3/8/2017 2:34:00 PM
Lovely unique topic, CayCay. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 11:15:00 PM
Wonderful CayCay. I always like how you manage to get the strangest words in, and still it flows naturally. Congratulations :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:00:00 PM
Creative description of the planet Jupiter, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well formed pleiades.
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Date: 3/7/2017 7:56:00 PM
Nicely done, CayCay, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:56:00 PM
I love learning about our solar system, and your poem really described Jupiter so well! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:44:00 AM
This one is JAZZY snazzy, Caycay. Love the use of JIVE in there!! I was wanting to put in mine "Jam up and jelly tight" like in the song!
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:53:00 AM
Oh, I love to read about the planets CayCay. I sure hope this one does real well! I loved it! : ) 7
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:52:00 PM
Great take on the J theme CayCay - this is the first one I've seen for the planet:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/5/2017 5:54:00 PM
Oh, good - maybe I'm the only Jupiter! I was number 35 and sent the contest on to its next phase (I had the power - ain't that cool?). Good luck to you always and hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/5/2017 5:40:00 PM
Wow, great one CayCay. :)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/5/2017 5:52:00 PM
Hey, thanks, Heidi! I just now 'cast' this poem and to get a nibble so quickly - well, that hasn't happened to me much and I kinda like it! Thanks and thanks and hugs ... CayCay

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