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Jupiter

Jewel is largest orb,
Jazzed third bright in night sky,
Juts in fifth place from sun.
Joins name of Roman god.
Jam rules Sag and Pisces;
Jells expansion and grace,
Jives like a lucky star.




March 5, 2017

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Kim Merryman / Pleiades J

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Agnes Krampe Date: 3/8/2017 2:34:00 PM Lovely unique topic, CayCay. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2017 2:22:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 3/7/2017 11:15:00 PM Wonderful CayCay. I always like how you manage to get the strangest words in, and still it flows naturally. Congratulations :) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 3/7/2017 9:00:00 PM Creative description of the planet Jupiter, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 3/7/2017 8:12:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this well formed pleiades. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/7/2017 7:56:00 PM Nicely done, CayCay, congratulations on your win hugs Eve Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2017 6:56:00 PM I love learning about our solar system, and your poem really described Jupiter so well! Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2017 8:44:00 AM This one is JAZZY snazzy, Caycay. Love the use of JIVE in there!! I was wanting to put in mine "Jam up and jelly tight" like in the song! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/6/2017 4:53:00 AM Oh, I love to read about the planets CayCay. I sure hope this one does real well! I loved it! : ) 7 Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/5/2017 5:52:00 PM Great take on the J theme CayCay - this is the first one I've seen for the planet:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 3/5/2017 5:54:00 PM Oh, good - maybe I'm the only Jupiter! I was number 35 and sent the contest on to its next phase (I had the power - ain't that cool?). Good luck to you always and hugs ... CayCay

Heidi Sands Date: 3/5/2017 5:40:00 PM Wow, great one CayCay. :) Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 3/5/2017 5:52:00 PM Hey, thanks, Heidi! I just now 'cast' this poem and to get a nibble so quickly - well, that hasn't happened to me much and I kinda like it! Thanks and thanks and hugs ... CayCay