Jump

JUMP 

I
JUMP. 
To find
AN ESCAPE
FROM the unpleasant 
Situations that plague my life. 
TORTUROUS CIRCUMSTANCES, unable to fight back
I   T E L E P O R T   to another
place, time, future, past,
ANYWHERE,
but here,
or 
now.  


1.28.2017©Deborah Burch


Fibonacci 


*note...
Inspiration from "Jumper", by Stephen Gould
(book)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:06 PM
whewww, I was ok. You were just doing a double reverse one, like I often do with my etheree!!
Burch Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Lol!!! Did you see the hidden acrostic? ;)
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:03 PM
great job with this one! I think I may have done mine wrong. Do we have to reverse it and go back to lower syllable count? YIKES. Before I post mine, I better check into that.
Burch Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Lol. No hun. I was just trying to be a little creative with form. ;) you're so funny!! Love you bunches girl!!
May Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Well done Deb..hugs
Burch Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thank you so much Joseph!!:) hugs!!
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