Jump

JUMP I JUMP. To find AN ESCAPE FROM the unpleasant Situations that plague my life. TORTUROUS CIRCUMSTANCES, unable to fight back I T E L E P O R T to another place, time, future, past, ANYWHERE, but here, or now. 1.28.2017©Deborah Burch Fibonacci *note... Inspiration from "Jumper", by Stephen Gould (book)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2017 8:06:00 PM

whewww, I was ok. You were just doing a double reverse one, like I often do with my etheree!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/29/2017 8:25:00 PM

Lol!!! Did you see the hidden acrostic? ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2017 8:03:00 PM

great job with this one! I think I may have done mine wrong. Do we have to reverse it and go back to lower syllable count? YIKES. Before I post mine, I better check into that.

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/29/2017 8:24:00 PM

Lol. No hun. I was just trying to be a little creative with form. ;) you're so funny!! Love you bunches girl!!

Joseph May

Date: 1/29/2017 7:55:00 PM

Well done Deb..hugs

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/29/2017 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph!!:) hugs!!