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July's Fire

July's fire
Fireworks, stars
Sparkling, booming, bursting
Brightening that woebegone night!
The fourth day

Written On: July 4th, 2017
P.S. Happy Fourth of July!

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John Fleming

July 22, 2017 at 4:22 PM

Hhmm...well, I am an Englishman...so I best be wary of what I say. Lol :) But seriously, Alyssa, I think you have done a pretty good job here. Never seen a fourth of July celebration - got a fairly good picture of it all now though! My best regards. :) john P.s Your excellent little poem is crammed full of vitality and colour - Excellent!

Alyssa Lorette

July 23, 2017 at 3:55 PM

Thank you for your comment, John! :)