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July's Fire

July's fire Fireworks, stars Sparkling, booming, bursting Brightening that woebegone night! The fourth day Written On: July 4th, 2017 P.S. Happy Fourth of July!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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John Fleming
Date: 7/22/2017 4:22:00 PM
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Hhmm...well, I am an Englishman...so I best be wary of what I say. Lol :) But seriously, Alyssa, I think you have done a pretty good job here. Never seen a fourth of July celebration - got a fairly good picture of it all now though! My best regards. :) john P.s Your excellent little poem is crammed full of vitality and colour - Excellent!
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/23/2017 3:55:00 PM
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Thank you for your comment, John! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/5/2017 3:39:00 PM
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This was wonderful Alyssa, so bright and filled with fun. Sorry I missed it yesterday so Happy 5th of July. : )
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/5/2017 3:57:00 PM
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It's alright, thanks for reading it! :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/4/2017 12:29:00 PM
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Happy Fourth of July, Alyssa:) My dog wishes this day would never come. lol
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 7/4/2017 2:39:00 PM
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Thanks! I know what you mean, my dog gets scared of the fireworks too. Anyways, I hope you have a happy fourth of July, Daniel! :)

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