V. Deepa Poet Villanelle

July-My Favourite Month

I have an ardent attachment with July,
Coz me and my partner share our born days 
This month ~for love on each other we rely.

Monsoon seems to be high, hoping to satisfy
Nature showers whole heartedly, as it sprays
I have an ardent attachment with july

"July" named by the Roman Senate, to imply
The birth of Julius Caesar, for giving honour it says
This month ~for love on each other we rely

Larkspur and water Lily are in largest supply,
Blossoms absolute bond of love, prevents frays
I have an ardent attachment with july

Meditating in dark, about him who is in Dubai, 
Refusing to message & enquire regarding holidays
This month~for love on each other we rely

Sitting in two different countries, we ally
Thinking of past memoirs always
I have an ardent attachment with july.
This month~for love on each other we rely.

 Villanelle  form with rhyme scheme:
A1 b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 A2.

Written on 27-6-2020.

Note1:Month of the year that I like most poetry Contest.(N/A)
Judged on 18-7-2020

Note2:STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (24) ,any form,
any theme Poetry Contest(N/A)
Judged on 19-8-2020

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Caren Krutsinger July 3, 2020 at 5:50 AM Happy news, my friend. It is July - your favorite month! A sweet tribute. V. Deepa July 3, 2020 at 1:02 PM Hello Caren mam, It's nice to see you reviewing my poems.:-)I am cherished by your uplifting and lovely words of appreciation. Yes ,July has arrived.It's my favorite month:-) Best wishes for all your works too.Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Take care.With love~Deepa:-)

John Watt June 28, 2020 at 2:17 AM Lots of love in this - for July and for your partner. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Warm regards ~ John V. Deepa June 28, 2020 at 8:59 AM Hello John Sir, Thanks a bunch for spending a little of your precious time to read my work.:-)I am indeed pleased to recieve your kind reviews and appreciations. Best wishes for you too.Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~ Deepa:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu June 27, 2020 at 6:06 PM Hello Deepa, a lovely poem about July. Good luck in the contest. Enjo your evening my friend. love. Darlene De Beaulieu June 28, 2020 at 5:47 PM Hello Deepa, you are so welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend Much love my friend. V. Deepa June 28, 2020 at 1:51 AM Hello Darlene mam, Thanks a bunch for your positive words and souful wishes always.:-) Have a great day.:-) Take care.Much love:-)

Tom Cunningham June 27, 2020 at 4:28 PM And a beautiful month it is too Deepa, Good luck in the contest Tom V. Deepa June 28, 2020 at 1:49 AM Hello Tom sir, Thankyou for your appreciation and wishes.:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep writing and Keep inspiring us:-) Take care.Warm regards. ~Deepa