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July Fourth Is Near

July Fourth is near


            Restful day with louder night


            Bring on the Big Bang

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Sue Mason

July 8, 2010 at 4:16 PM

Great use of the 5-7-5 form here, Daniel which would be a Senryu in this case as the Haiku is usually kept for nature writing but its all the same thing so I'll take my school teacher self on down the road (LOL) and just say Congratulations on having your writing featured this week here at the Soup!!

Doris Culverhouse

July 6, 2010 at 7:30 AM

great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2010 at 3:28 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Daniel. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

July 5, 2010 at 2:23 PM

You have me smiling once again with this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Adeleke Adeite

July 5, 2010 at 10:52 AM

Congrats Dan, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Happy July 4th, to everyone! Love, Adeleke