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July Fourth Is Near

July Fourth is near Restful day with louder night Bring on the Big Bang

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/8/2010 4:16:00 PM
Great use of the 5-7-5 form here, Daniel which would be a Senryu in this case as the Haiku is usually kept for nature writing but its all the same thing so I'll take my school teacher self on down the road (LOL) and just say Congratulations on having your writing featured this week here at the Soup!!
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:30:00 AM
great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Daniel. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 2:23:00 PM
You have me smiling once again with this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congrats Dan, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Happy July 4th, to everyone! Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:31:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:26:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku - many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:55:00 PM
Cute last line, Bring on the big bang! Fun one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/3/2010 10:36:00 AM
You have me smiling with this one. Sounds like a good way to celebrate. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 7/3/2010 10:35:00 AM
Sounds like you'll have an explosive evening! Great haiku Daniel.
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:56:00 AM
Great Write my friend.....Larry
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:03:00 AM
A nice expressions for 4th of july
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