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July 4th Haiku

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 4:27:00 AM

Such a sad time for pets and for vets who have PTSD. It is ironic we are supposedly celebrating our leaders, and yet, we hurt them in this way with these loud angry pops and pows.

James Inman

Date: 5/23/2020 12:52:00 PM

A true life experience for many of us. The irony is that they don't seem to realize they are safest when they are with us.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2020 11:31:00 PM

So true - dogs do not appreciate fireworks.

Carole Duet
Date: 3/23/2020 5:28:00 PM

Lol..no, they don't, Line. Thanks for reading. I hope you liked the fireworks though. Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2019 8:00:00 PM

hey, where is a new poem, Carol!! You gotta put up a Thanksgiving one! pretty please.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2019 8:25:00 AM

Poor little guy. I can imagine that would be frightening.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/1/2019 11:51:00 PM

A belated thanks for reading and commenting on my poem, Richard. However, I didn't bring my dog to the fireworks show. It was fiction...but true! Right? Carole :D

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/24/2019 3:24:00 AM

Fireworks eh, great haiku on them, and it touches on the pet side too. Pets mostly do run and hide from fireworks. My cat goes under the bed when they blast away. Thumbs up! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too. Nobody comments on me unless I request it.

Carole Duet
Date: 10/6/2019 10:32:00 PM

Sorry to be so slow in replying to your comment...but i did want to thank you. Carole Duet

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 6:33:00 AM

Haha loved your clever and cool poem!

Carole Duet
Date: 8/6/2019 12:49:00 AM

Thank you, J.W, Glad you liked it. Did you turn off the lights and watch the fireworks "full screen"? Carole :D

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/31/2019 4:33:00 AM

Oh no - a perfect turn line that impressed and amused me until I wondered if it might be true! I hope not because this haiku really does the haiku thing. It grabbed me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Carole Duet
Date: 8/6/2019 12:51:00 AM

Well, I'm so glad it did the "haiku thing" (whatever that is), CayCay. lol And, no I actually left my dog at home because I knew she would be so frightened when the fireworks started. Carole :D

Joseph May

Date: 7/30/2019 7:55:00 PM

Pets are not keen on the fireworks...Very nice haiku Carole..

Carole Duet
Date: 8/6/2019 12:54:00 AM

hanks, Joseph. I'm glad you liked my haiku and yes, you're right. That's why I actually didn't bring my dog to the fireworks. Carole :D

Maria Williams

Date: 7/26/2019 11:56:00 PM

I really love this cleaverly crafted Haiku, Carole. It brings back vivid memories of my poor little chihuahua, who would hide under the bed trembling and shaking, a total mess, when they lit the fireworks on New Years day. To make things worse there was 2 sets, children's ones at 9, and the midnight one. A fave for the memory....Maria Hugs

Maria Williams
Date: 7/31/2019 1:51:00 AM

Thats good to hear

Carole Duet
Date: 7/30/2019 7:16:00 PM

Oh Maria! I used to have a chihuahua that I dearly loved and I know how they shake when frightened. My poodle doesn't shake but she does hide. Maybe some earmuffs would help. lol Can't you just imagine that! Anyway, in reality my dog did not run away. She missed the bar-b-que though because I left her safe at home. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2019 9:53:00 AM

Poor dog. When I was a 6 year old kid, a big black lab was afraid of an alarm. I took my little hands and placed them over his ears. He was so thankful he followed me around the neighbourhood every time I went out to play with my friends.

Carole Duet
Date: 7/30/2019 7:11:00 PM

What a sweet thing for a little boy to do for a dog that wasn't even his own! I knew you were a kind-hearted person, Paul. In reality, I left my little dog safe at home on July 4th. Thanks for reading and commenting, Paul. Carole :D

Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2019 2:13:00 PM

The 4th of July is an important date to remember and celebrate...alas, Carole, some animals are not so keen! It's up to us owners to put their mind at rest. Regards // paul

Carole Duet
Date: 7/30/2019 7:07:00 PM

Yes, July 4th represents freedom from England for us and everybody has a bar-b-que and fireworks. It's fun for all but the poor animals. That's why in reality I left my poodle safe at home. Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 7:06:00 PM

so cute and so typical!

Carole Duet
Date: 7/30/2019 7:04:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Yes, all dogs have those supersonic ears! Carole :D

Byron Kaya

Date: 7/4/2019 12:52:00 AM

This is so cute! Hope they really didn't run away. My dogs go nuts when fireworks are around. Bye! :)

Carole Duet
Date: 7/8/2019 1:01:00 AM

Hi Byron (my dad's name too). I'm glad you liked the "July 4th Haiku". No, my dog didn't actually run away. She stayed home safe and sound. Carole :D

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/3/2019 8:38:00 AM

That's so sad...I feel it for them...Great imagery...Happy 4th of July...

Carole Duet
Date: 7/8/2019 12:56:00 AM

Thanks, Arturo. Well, I just left my dog at home with a special treat rather than subject her to the fireworks. Carole :D

Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2019 6:47:00 AM

...and he barks like hell too (lol) Nice haiku Carole :) Hoping you have a lovely fourth. Sending love...and some sparklers. Hugs always, Charlie

Carole Duet
Date: 7/8/2019 12:54:00 AM

Well, thank you, Charlie. Wishing you a "sparkling day"! Carole :D

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/2/2019 11:41:00 PM

So sweet. Fireworks are so scary for pets.

Carole Duet
Date: 7/2/2019 11:58:00 PM

Thanks, Line. It's true. Their ears are so much more sensitive than ours. I hope you got to read the poem after I added the fireworks. They were so beautiful. Carole :D