July

JULY

red
white, blue
firework-fizz
dynamite crowds
cheer

5/21/2019
Sponsor - Caren Krutsinger
June or July Lanterne Poetry Contest

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Joseph May

June 3, 2019 at 5:18 PM

Nicely done Kim...Congrats on your win..

Paul Callus

June 3, 2019 at 4:16 PM

Congratulations on your high-flying win, Kim! Undoubtedly you are celebrating the 4th of July:) - Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2019 at 5:16 PM

Thank you, dear poet!

Tom Cunningham

June 3, 2019 at 3:43 PM

Last year in Florida the fireworks were amazing. The US knows how to put on a good display. Congrats Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2019 at 5:16 PM

For sure! Thank you, Tom!

Jan Allison

June 3, 2019 at 8:22 AM

very patriotic Kim, congrats on your win :-) xx hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2019 at 5:17 PM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs!

Line Gauthier

June 3, 2019 at 6:28 AM

Congrats on your top win, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2019 at 6:39 AM

Thank you, dear Line! xx

William Kelii Kekaula

June 3, 2019 at 6:16 AM

TG 'tis not about bugs--Hat's off to your high placement Kim, Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2019 at 6:38 AM

LOL, William! Thank you!

Susan Ashley

May 22, 2019 at 6:40 PM

Your talent is on brilliant display with this awesome short poem, Kim. warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

June 3, 2019 at 6:37 AM

Thank you, sweet Susan!

Andrea Dietrich

May 22, 2019 at 4:41 PM

very well done. You used as much imagery as you could with this limiting form.

Kim Rodrigues

May 22, 2019 at 4:54 PM

So limiting! Thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 22, 2019 at 1:15 PM

- Hurray for July 4th, Kim :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

May 22, 2019 at 4:54 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

William Kelii Kekaula

May 22, 2019 at 10:22 AM

Patriotism set up our days, soundly coloring our nights Kim, best wishes indeed, Aloha wk

Kurt Ravidas

May 22, 2019 at 5:35 AM

Hm, googling an Apple Pie day: “Baseball, hot dogs, apple pie and Chevrolet.” Nice! I love Apple Pie day! P.S.: We have white blue red June 12)

Kim Rodrigues

May 22, 2019 at 8:56 AM

We share the same colors :)

Gershon Wolf

May 21, 2019 at 9:55 PM

Apple Pie is my favorite flavor for the Day! Good luck in the contest, Kim! Warm, July-like wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

May 22, 2019 at 8:57 AM

I will get back to the warmth, I mean the hot as hades...but for now lovely cool weather :)

Mystic Rose Rose

May 21, 2019 at 8:13 PM

Nicely packaged poem Kim, gl

Kim Rodrigues

May 21, 2019 at 8:14 PM

Thank you, Pixie :)

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