Judgment

Looking deep within the eyes of fate and watch as life slowly drifts away, yet your hate
remains darkening your heart more than before threatening your inner-core, and as you fall
to the screams you become the outcast they all see, so to clear your mind you lay down the
edge of the knife in hope it will take the edge off life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 23, 2010 at 5:17 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Adam. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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