Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Nonet

' Judgement Inside the Purgatory '

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erred against God's omnipotent will
sacrosanct commandments profaned
myriad chances bestowed
squandered - still sins exist
all are imperfect
but must do good
now, squealing
being
JUDGED.


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jun-jun villanueva
IMAGINATION
< June 09,2012 ---- 7:58pm philippine time>

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Skat A January 16, 2016 at 5:17 PM Jun-Jun, I do love the poem, and word Purgatory.....SKAT

Carol Eastman August 1, 2012 at 4:34 PM Congratulations on the win.

Sara Kendrick June 14, 2012 at 3:35 PM Great descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 14, 2012 at 4:40 AM Congratulations jun-jun xx

Poet Destroyer A June 13, 2012 at 9:15 PM JUN-JUN, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2012 at 12:24 PM excellent,..pd

David Williams June 9, 2012 at 11:06 AM Jun-Jun, this really is very imaginative, good luck my friend...David

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2012 at 7:03 AM Well written jun-jun - life can be a happy journey. - oxox love Anne-Lise