Nick Trim Poet Rhyme

Judge Me Poet

abandoned because I got a man banned
through responding to his grotesque brand
of uncanny comments insulting and bland
label me a yob because of ground I stand

standing up to a problem is just that standing up
it's not a descending spiral down to their level
it's a man prepared to stop their unjust corrupt
seeking blissful peace yet a yob you label

yet had this yob done as you do with ignorance
wouldn't you wake up somedays to be upset
by nasty comments knocking self assurance
and left unnecessarily whilst hard to forget

you watched a war and judge those at play
did you not stop and think it could have come your way
whilst you condemn and say what you say
you watched from a peace, a peace you still have today

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Tom Cunningham June 29, 2019 at 3:42 AM From what I heard you done nothing wrong Nick only stood up to a moron who hasn't been missed. Anyway I'm Sparticus. Tom Nick Trim July 2, 2019 at 8:03 AM I am Spartacus lol I like that :) made me smile and he hasn't been missed you are right, a bit of excitement for our lives I suppose lol thanks Tom

Jan Allison June 29, 2019 at 2:34 AM If folk had seen what he wrote they would have seen YOU should never have been banned Nick, just keep writing - my muse has left I have hardly been on soup since I went to uk for hubbies final week of treatment:-) hugs Jan xx Nick Trim July 2, 2019 at 8:04 AM I shouldn't have been banned but I seem attract a banning lol Soup and Facebook at the same time, I discovered a world beyond the internet most colourful and active :) hope your hubby is alright Jan :)